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A Lonely Soul.

Posted by NyanaCreation - May 17th, 2018


Hey Guy's 

So i just wrote something and it's not the best thing i ever wrote but i just wanted to write something about something that has been bothering me. it's a bit complicated but what the poem sais about the lonely soul is what i want to do but can't there are alot of hidden meanings in the poem itself so i am curious what you think it means. anyway enjoy this short poem i wrote just a couple minutes ago, 

a lonely soul. 

Somethimes at night i see a shadow. 
wandering the woods behind the trees.
the soul looks at all the people who pass by,
but the soul never goes to them. 

Somethimes i hear music, 
behind the trees i see the soul dancing. 
all alone with the lights that apear. 
it never dances with anyone else. 

I saw the soul again today and yesterday, 
while i walk this dark path it follows me. 
the lights in his eyes follow me over the path. 
it doesn't seem dangerous but i am seeing him. 

His eyes are always there, 
watching people go by without seeing it.
the beautiful eyes behind the trees that they miss. 
where he dances and watches over them. 

In the beginning i was scared. 
i didn't know what to expect.
but slowely every night went by, 
and he was watching with a curious eye. 

Every night i tried to get closer, 
to see if i could lend him a hand. 
but he was scared and ran, 
and again i was alone in the dark woods. 

The day after i walked again. 
over the dark path under the stars. 
the moon seemed brighter than before. 
mabey this was my special night. 

That night i hear music again, 
behind the trees i saw lights dancing. 
slowely i walked towards it. 

He saw me but carried on, 
he was singing an old song. 
i heard it before from my grandma and 
started to sing along. 

Slowely he turned around, 
he didn't expect someones to join him. 
i carried on with my song and he walked towards me. 

that night i dissapeared. 
nobody knows where i went, 
but i know i joined a lonely soul in the woods. 
with his friendly eyes i went with him. 

From that night on i became a soul as well. 
i never died or took my life. 
i was granted a gift from him. 
he just wanted a friend and i was there. 

now in the forest we sing and dance,
and watch over people who pass trough our forest. 
he was just a lonely soul who wanted a friend. 
and now i am here. 

he will never have to be a lonely soul again. 

 

 

(i hope you enjoyed that poem don't forget to comment and tell me what it means ^^ anyway here are some songs. they are not upbeat and a bit sad but they are still good songs. i found alot of songs i wanted to share and don't forget these are all songs by other people anyway i hope you enjoy the songs as well) 

~N 
 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_PL5uQJKTMA               
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UNFDMstyO9U


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ko4QiFPUgwI                   
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M0KgNx8Jw-I

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HWm7sF3gAB4               
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FSkXKhc_vE

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6q4Dev8N1LE                   
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VqLQpb2YMt0

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qNdGFe59E2M

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_RLID5KM-Hw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tg22ykfN82I


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Comments

What do "I" think it means?
On the surface it seems to tell a story of two who without speaking can relate to one another. (There song is enough). Hidden meanings are hard to decipher and I really don't want to infer anything just witness the two in the woods assured, by soft lights, that there moments of peace will carry them beyond anyone's view. As I listened to your poem, this image came to mind.
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/adventvoice/have-you-ever-danced-with-the-devil-in-the-pale-moonlight
I might be off, but I thought it was worth a try.
I am glad you found a friend and that you will never be a lonely soul again.

I think that's beautiful how you say it. and the hidden part would be revealed for a bit in the beginning part where i talk about that i want to that but i can't. instead of embressing the soul he went away. mabey you can read it again and think of the oppisent because there is alot of hidden meaning there. thanks for thinking of that picture i think it's beautiful. it is off but it comes close enough. the characters in my story are faceless though.
and the friend i found walked away. (poem explains it a bit more)

Wow,I couldn't have written something like this when I was your age.Seeing how poetry is a form of art which has different perspectives from which people look at it,I would say the same goes for your piece above.One way is to find out what inspired you to write this-is it for someone or did something happen?However,it's best if you don't answer that as it's like revealing the magic behind finding out messages in the poem,so I'll write my thoughts about it.
Personally,this reminds me of nature that people tend to take for granted.Its similar to being a person who is there but never noticed by others who are being busy with their lives.Like those times when nature interacts with people,we may feel it but never take the time to truly enjoy it but when we do,it hides itself away.I suppose the writer('you') who wanted to befriend the person in the poem is like someone trying to find and embrace nature and in the end,does so.Of course,the feeling one gets when in the presence of nature is indescribable and you wish it was like this forever.
I think that's the best way I could write out my thoughts.You may have had a different idea when you wrote it but it's best that you keep it a secret,after all,poetry is magic.Keep it up,my friend!Beautiful work!

aahww thank you ^^ i thought it ended up a bit bad but i posted it anyway beccause of the meaning. and yah i like poems because there is my meaning but there are so many meanings that other people can see that i didn't see before what i find beautiful. the story that you give me i think is beautiful. i never thought about it like that and the meaning has his own kinda magic ^^ and you wrote it perfect ^^ thanks for writing a comment i enjoyed reading it alot. and i'll try to make some more poems in the future. but thanks for the compliments <3

@MchectorII @NyanaCreation You have the talent for poetry so don't worry too much about how your poems will turn out.With patience and practice,you'll get better at it and I would love to see more of your work too!

i'm really happy to hear that ^^ thank you.