Hey Guy's
So i just wrote something and it's not the best thing i ever wrote but i just wanted to write something about something that has been bothering me. it's a bit complicated but what the poem sais about the lonely soul is what i want to do but can't there are alot of hidden meanings in the poem itself so i am curious what you think it means. anyway enjoy this short poem i wrote just a couple minutes ago,
a lonely soul.
Somethimes at night i see a shadow.
wandering the woods behind the trees.
the soul looks at all the people who pass by,
but the soul never goes to them.
Somethimes i hear music,
behind the trees i see the soul dancing.
all alone with the lights that apear.
it never dances with anyone else.
I saw the soul again today and yesterday,
while i walk this dark path it follows me.
the lights in his eyes follow me over the path.
it doesn't seem dangerous but i am seeing him.
His eyes are always there,
watching people go by without seeing it.
the beautiful eyes behind the trees that they miss.
where he dances and watches over them.
In the beginning i was scared.
i didn't know what to expect.
but slowely every night went by,
and he was watching with a curious eye.
Every night i tried to get closer,
to see if i could lend him a hand.
but he was scared and ran,
and again i was alone in the dark woods.
The day after i walked again.
over the dark path under the stars.
the moon seemed brighter than before.
mabey this was my special night.
That night i hear music again,
behind the trees i saw lights dancing.
slowely i walked towards it.
He saw me but carried on,
he was singing an old song.
i heard it before from my grandma and
started to sing along.
Slowely he turned around,
he didn't expect someones to join him.
i carried on with my song and he walked towards me.
that night i dissapeared.
nobody knows where i went,
but i know i joined a lonely soul in the woods.
with his friendly eyes i went with him.
From that night on i became a soul as well.
i never died or took my life.
i was granted a gift from him.
he just wanted a friend and i was there.
now in the forest we sing and dance,
and watch over people who pass trough our forest.
he was just a lonely soul who wanted a friend.
and now i am here.
he will never have to be a lonely soul again.
(i hope you enjoyed that poem don't forget to comment and tell me what it means ^^ anyway here are some songs. they are not upbeat and a bit sad but they are still good songs. i found alot of songs i wanted to share and don't forget these are all songs by other people anyway i hope you enjoy the songs as well)
~N
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_PL5uQJKTMA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UNFDMstyO9U
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ko4QiFPUgwI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M0KgNx8Jw-I
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HWm7sF3gAB4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FSkXKhc_vE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6q4Dev8N1LE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VqLQpb2YMt0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qNdGFe59E2M
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_RLID5KM-Hw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tg22ykfN82I
AdventVoice
What do "I" think it means?
On the surface it seems to tell a story of two who without speaking can relate to one another. (There song is enough). Hidden meanings are hard to decipher and I really don't want to infer anything just witness the two in the woods assured, by soft lights, that there moments of peace will carry them beyond anyone's view. As I listened to your poem, this image came to mind.
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/adventvoice/have-you-ever-danced-with-the-devil-in-the-pale-moonlight
I might be off, but I thought it was worth a try.
I am glad you found a friend and that you will never be a lonely soul again.
NyanaCreation
I think that's beautiful how you say it. and the hidden part would be revealed for a bit in the beginning part where i talk about that i want to that but i can't. instead of embressing the soul he went away. mabey you can read it again and think of the oppisent because there is alot of hidden meaning there. thanks for thinking of that picture i think it's beautiful. it is off but it comes close enough. the characters in my story are faceless though.
and the friend i found walked away. (poem explains it a bit more)