Nice one. The beggining was bit hard for me to understand. It was really misterious but in the middle when you started to describe what happens and something about enviroment you made a lovely ambience which I totaly love ^_^. I think that the "sadist's" personality fits perfectly into that story. A bit funny but still creepy. And the gambling game... It's so easy and I think thats good. Idea with gambling makes story more interesting and you don't have to focus too much at the game rules in future.
I'm waiting for 2 part ^_^ and next "New friend" ;)
VikingWalker
Yay! ^^
It's damn scary!
Good luck!
NyanaCreation
Thank you so much ^_^