Must say I'm surprised to be on the list. I am, yet at the same time I'm not. Regardless I'm thankful of it. Glad to see you're still active on Newgrounds. I'm not active and probably never will be again, but hey there's always a possibility. Thanks for what you did when we were great friends.
VikingWalker
It is not without reason I am still by your side, N, and will continue to stay there until it is impossible for us: you are an amazing individual, giving advice about pretty much everything, as well as asking for advice, showing that you are willing to accept help and tips, which is a good sign. You are also a developing artist and writer, and I want to see you get better. You are also amazing at understanding and compassion, and that makes you one of the best friends I have :)
Sometimes we argue, true, but it is difficult not to, when we talk about the complicated and faceted things we do ;)
But we learn more about each other in the process, and our bond is made stronger, because we are able to try and fix the dents those times made, together!
Neither of us want to abandon the other, because each of us know that we have much good and support to give the other.
You are also amazing at understanding and compassion, and that makes you one of the best friends I have. Thank *you* ^^
Now *I'm* done with the sappy stuff :P , so now my thoughts about part 3 of your interesting story:
-Your grammar has improved greatly over time :D
There are still a few errors, but they are basic, and doesn't ruin much ;)
-You still need more paragraphs :P ...the first part of the continued story was divided nicely, but then there were 2 "walls of text". I know you would like to keep conversations together, but between the talking there were impressions or actions seen or made by Sam. It would be less tiring for the eyes if there was paragraphs in between those ;)
-About the content: Marvelous! We see into the mind of Sam, who is nervous and on "new ground" with her new appearance, and worried what guys will think of her, and if they accept the "illusion" of her binder, wig and clothes. The actions and mentality of the guys are believable, and THEN we hear the horrible truth about Sara!! (unless Aaron is an evil manipulator that want to pit Sara's friends up against each other (which I think is unlikely :P )
I look forward to see what games Sam and Aaron will try out, and what they will buy!
(maybe Aaron will be sweet and buy Sam an awesome game she would like, but can't afford? ;) )
I also look forward to hear what Lylian will think and say about Sara's... "actions". And if they confront Sara about it.
Good luck in writing part 4, N!