yaaay, I loved reading every part! thanks for the heads up of your new post :D
I love the relation that all the family has, it's so close and they have fun with each other, so it's a beautiful relation :D, I love how the mom reacted with the face covered in ash XD
Also, the friends that Sam has, are amazing too, and Sam is sweet and a great person, I love that Sam enjoys giving and getting hugs, and playing with friends and family.
Ow, it was very sad when Sam fought with Wendy, but I'm sure things can get better since they have a great relationship :)
The wig is a beautiful idea, show a sweet bond between all of them, and at the same time gives a lot of space for the story to have lots of different situations.
My global view, this story is lovely, shows beautiful values, like friendship, acceptane, and family love, your writing is always so warm to read, gives that tender and kind feeling, and it feels lovely, and even though it has sad moments, it feels as if things can work out :)
VikingWalker
Wow, what a story!
You must have worked on this for a looong time, no?
Cool that you have combined facts from your life, and fiction from your imagination to create this!
I'm amazed at how lifelike the mother seems - warm and caring, and the smell of her pancakes spreading through the house, and up the stairs... mmm!
(but Sam ran away because her sister had a weird dream about her?
You sure Sam isn't overreacting a little? :P )
I really look forward to part 2 of this... and the next part of Nyana's and Aaron's adventure :D
NyanaCreation
Thank you so much ^_^
and yah it took around 45 minutes until an hour to finish.
and thank you i tried to make it as life like so you could think of how it could
have looked.
(yah Sam over reacts but that's because her sisters dreams always say somthing about her and that Sam thought that his sister turned against him. and of course that hurts)
i'm happy to hear that ^_^