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NyanaCreation
welcome to my little corner of the internet,my name is Nyan or Nyana and i am a non-binary bean who mostly makes
art, stories and audio. my goal is to make your day a bit brighter with the content that i make. i hope we can have some good times toghter.

Beginner Game Artist

somewhere in space <3

Joined on 10/7/15

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You never knew about @Jazza 's art contest before?

Nope i never really knew before a couple day's ago. but i wanted to try somthing new ^_^ but now i know

Greetings!
I was notified of your existence by your comment on Joverseer916's recent news post. He's a buddy of mine, and we've praised eachother's art for some time, ever since I got on here and discovered the Overseer animations. Anyway:

I enjoyed your short story about the couple in pain. It has both abstract and physical depictions, which are not always easy to put into a coherent text. But you did so quite well.
But what the text need, in my humble opinion, are paragraphs.

My eyes were strained after reading the whoe thing, and when I looked to the side, I had an optical illusion where horizontal grey lines was in my field of view :O
With paragraphs, this is avoided.
Spelling could be better, but I get the feeling that either:
English is not your mother tongue, or you are of younger age, and the texts are rushed, which I suspect the most, since the grammar itself was flawless.

Checked out your sketches as well. Not bad! Some colors would lift them up, and give them more life. Also, you may want to get a hold of a scanner. Scanning the pic/sketches will render them in much higher quality. I'll do so with my old sketches soon, which you can find on my profile.

Until our next encounter!
With the very best of regards,
JamesHatfeld :)

Hey James,

Thank you soooo much for notesing me (i honestly didn't think that that would happen)
but anyway,

i'm happy you enjoyed my story i write for a while now and i am pracatsing in that kind of style of writing most of the time. i knew i should put in paragrahps but i didn't know where to put them at that time so i desided i didn't put them in but i understand very well what you mean.

sorry for that should think again if i put them in and for the spelling yep english is absolutly not my mother tongue (i speak it for 2 years or 3 so not to long) but i try my best (and no i'm not a very young age but i'm not super old as well)

but anyway, i'm happy you liked my drawings. and for the colors i'm very busy with that. i'm learning how to put shadows in my drawings now and later on want to learn how i can make the most use of colors because i'm not very good at it now. but for now i'm holding it on old fashion drawing. but i'm happy you liked it.

And yes mabey until our Next encounter,
Greetings,
~N (MinecraftGirl2)