It's a beautiful writing. And i love how you still make your writing reach all senses. It's so easy to picture, hear, feel all you write, and it's so great for feeling close to the story. I love the concept of the past, present future, It's a very interesting idea.
And something I noticed a while ago, but this reading confirmed, is that you're so mature when you write, you talk lot of things that people haven't lived yet or don't fully understand yet, but you're so mature and looks like you understand lot of things that can take a long time for all of us to understand :D
VikingWalker
Interesting concept about the past, present and future as writers in their chairs, with the future becoming the present, who becomes the past. Never thought of it like that, great writing ^_^ (although there are still a few typos, but pff)
Did you spend several days on this, or just a couple of hours?
Didn't know NG had the writing contest these days... maybe I'll "compete" next year :3
NyanaCreation
thanks ^^ i actually took me a day i think so not to long to write although i am not even sure how i thought of the idea i just thought of it and wrote it down on paper. i usually have this long spread of idea's and especially with stories i just let my thoughts carry me through the journey of the character and so this came of it and i am actually pretty proud of what i made to be honest. anyway thanks for the compliments ^^
and yup they do i want to participate more so i can practise my writing skills especially because i have less time for writing these days so this is a good alternitive to show people my work and to write more stuff for myself and have a bit of a challenge.