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NyanaCreation
welcome to my little corner of the internet,my name is Nyan or Nyana and i am a non-binary bean who mostly makes
art, stories and audio. my goal is to make your day a bit brighter with the content that i make. i hope we can have some good times toghter.

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somewhere in space <3

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Wow, I think the rest of your poem turned out wonderful, Sunrise! Here is why:

It looks to me like the hard mental (and maybe physical) work she does at home, caring for her mother, makes her close herself from others. Maybe it's because her effort takes so much energy, and she has none left for being social? Or maybe she doesn't want to involve anyone in her life because of her own reasons. Just a theory.

I feel bad for Suzy, going through what she does, taking care of her mother... their roles are kind of reversed... Suzy is working like a mother, and her mother is needing care like a child :( ...but at the same time, I also admire Suzy, for her strength... it's a pity it comes from something as painful, and maybe even embarrassing as that, though. But her situation will increase her inner strength, empathy and compassion. Important things.

I love that text you found! It puts my thoughts and intentions about a lot of things, and about a certain person, into words :) ...I could not have said that better myself! ^^

Good luck with your week, author ;) ^^

Thanks for sharing both your poem and the quoted poem. Both felt like two parts of a really good post. Sorry, I can't be more in depth than that.

Keep writing, Yo :)

Thanks alot ^_^ and don't worry about going into detphs of the post i know it can be hard ;)
anyway i am already glad you enjoyed it ^_^

and i'll keep writing for sure ;)

The Quote you found is beautiful, and your poem, is even more beautiful, I love the idea of questioning things, wondering if what people say is true or not, if maybe other are just missunderstanding something.

I'm happy to read a poem from you, you have lots of talent :D

yah i really liked the quote myself and wanted to share that as well ^_^ and i am so happy you love my poem :D and yah i like that as well. i have always wondered if people where not wrong about things and this was such a thing. it was an image of seeing someone but not knowing who they really are. that is what most people have and judge them before getting to know them.
i always want to see if it is true with most things and search for something i like alot. (probebly a long word with meaning i wrote there :p )

i am glad you enjoyed it ^_^ and that makes me smile so thanks alot for the compliment.